It's moments like that that makes lives worth living. It is the thing that you can get up and look forward to, that for once in your life you're not going to be just another face walking by.
Like I said, he's there every week, and I'll wager he'll be there tonight, up on the rickety stage the fat, red faced man running it handing him the microphone and the hush over the whole room as they wait, an electric hum penetrating the slack-jawed silence that hails the first tinny beats of the intro. Then, Boom-chicky-boom-chicky-boom-chicky-boom......'You keep sayin' you got something for me...(boom-chicky-boom-chicky...)...something you call love but con-fess...' and in a moment all those boots in that dingy, crammed bar are walking like never before, and shrill whistles stab the fuzzy air, a great cheer goes up, muffled to the street outside, and it's manly pats on his back and 'You go son', until he drifts to the bar and blends back in. Back into the little overlooked hole he fills day after day, you know he's there but you don't notice him, and you think that if one day that little hole was empty who would actually notice until it was too late. So he has to get up there and sing those songs because that way they won't forget him, that way he won't just be one more poor old, lonely drunk only remembered in pity and the obituary, 'piece of the furniture, he was'. In that bar he's alive, he means something.


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Hi Aisling, still catching up on my reading here. You're moving right along with this, very good.
As for the manuscript excerpt, yes, there is more to it. The manuscript was sent out to a few places and while I got very good feedback on it and it was considered for publication by one publisher, I've put it on the back burner for a while to give myself time to later give it another more objective look before doing any more work on it.
One chapter was published in "The Healing Woman" and I'll probably put it up on the writing sampler site early next week if time allows.
Your last comment really got me doing some serious thinking about us 'people watchers' and I'm planning on doing a post about it later this evening.
hi steve,
what is there not to get?! it's just a story about a person and what they see day to day. fiction not my own miserable life thank god!
Hi Jeni,
I'll look forward to seeing the other part of the manuscript! Yeah, the whole people watching thing certainly gets you thinking! Even blogger is a tool for this, how many times have you chanced upon a personal blog and read it out of morbid curiosity for whats going on in someone elses life?! People are inherantly nosy!
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